Traveling thru the forest
The darkness has given me a thrill
The sunlight shone on me
Like G-d's eyes spying on me with discontent
Determined to warn me to leave
For what unknown reason I cannot say
He threw a lightening bolt from the sky
I quaked with horror
And took my leave
The cracks of twigs and pinecones
Underneath my feet
Didn't make me go fast enough
Until I got to end of the wilderness
I realised that it wasn't G-d who wanted me out
It was my imagaination running thru me
As the sun began to shine once more
A wonderful and vivid depiction of fear of self. So brilliantly crafted and expressed. Enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing and I appreciate all the inspiring comments you put on my poems..
To see past one's own thoughts and imagination, an insightful journey!
Awesome imagery that is quite heart felt! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ...+++++++++++++++++++++++
So well written, your fears and imained sensations by the reader fully felt. Bravissima!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a nice depiction of hallucination.