Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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Jayne Louise Davies
Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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Friday, May 5, 2023

This Fella Called Bri Comments

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Well I know this fella called Bri,
He's just like an irritating fly!
He's such a rotter,
Hey where's my squatter?
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Bharati Nayak 06 May 2023

A nice poem about Bri Edwards, enjoyed reading.

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D.N. Rebb 05 May 2023

Oh, Jayne, Jayne, Jayne, what have you stirred up? (Still made me laugh this morning)

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Ha! I await his response with baited breath : ) lol

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Ricky M 05 May 2023

Fantastic poem, consider second line with last word as 'Bee' this will fit the rhyming meter instead of 'Fly'.

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Definitely a fly I think : ) lol

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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