Today amidst the mist
Just after dusk way after
The in-betweeners have done
Done their thrill seeker's
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Mmmh! man, well crafted and perfect flow.I enjoyed reading this sweet poem of yours... Siya_! !
perfect in every way, word choice is appropriate and uncontrived, economical and energizing too. It just pushes the poem along. purple a beautiful colour