Saturday, September 19, 2015

These Weirdo's Called My Family Comments

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My family is filled with crazy nuts
and they tend to like to show off their butts!
I don't know how I've lived this long.
I cause because my mind set is strong.
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Crystal Pierce
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Bri Edwards 28 October 2015

I cause because my mind set is strong. ................ i THINK you meant to type guess instead of cause. hmm? - - - - - - - - - - - - - it's not easy knowing when a word is made of one part or two, separated by a space. i've noticed some poets in other countries (which i think were influenced by British English speakers) use two-part words when i would use one part. like 'every one' instead of 'everyone'. you use mind set but i feel mindset is more proper: mindset ˈmīn(d) set/ noun noun: mindset; plural noun: mindsets; noun: mind-set; plural noun: mind-sets the established set of attitudes held by someone. the region seems stuck in a medieval mindset - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - my favorite lines: This is my family's twisted game. That's how everyone knows my name. i'll put this poem into MyPoemList. bri :)

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