The Terrible Fate Poem by Ahmad Abdullahi Dambam

The Terrible Fate

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I was ingress to the path of devils
With desert repleted by evils
My nub cluttered up with fears
I run helter skelter in tears

Yet to hit town, trekking as chameleon
The certainty to make the scene was suspicion
Hurry as tiger, but dragged by clay
A saviour i foresaw that cause to delay

He is the conqueror of evil and fright
The reservoir of miracles and bright
Salute the lion, predominantly beyond creature's critic Guards me as a king, terrible fate converted to aesthetic

Feeling comfortable than being with the throne
With cocksure for this friend who gives a crown
Hoping and optimistic to own a mysterious garden
But what to do with the garden stuff with burden.

The Terrible Fate
Monday, December 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem, 'The Terrible Fate' was written to my first love (HAUWA IBRAHEEM ADAM) . I fell in love at the time when calamity was etching my lifeline and it made me so terrified. It was a love at first sight, I was captivated by a girl of humble personality, with charming and innocence looks, the feelings were uneasy & horrible... I managed to give up and get the feelings removed from my heart through prayers N Qur'an.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
fatima umar mustapha 16 December 2017

flawless I am wanting more. keep it up

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fatima umar mustapha 16 December 2017

flawless I am wanting more. keep it up

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Gajanan Mishra 04 December 2017

feeling comfortable, beautiful, go on

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Ahmad A. D. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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