The Sun Comments

Clarence, even though my earlier comment says this would (and i'm sure DID) go into the November 2015 showcase, i want [AND SHALL! ] showcase this in the July 2016 showcase as well. so there! it is so good, ............and i won't have to look for another one for a while! :) :) bri :) and i'll put it into MyPoemList if it isn't already in there.

“While from its heat things died” ………..well, this part makes the Sun seem mean, BUT it’s just doing “its job”! nice one, Clarence. favorite lines: “It knows how to follow the sky Shining brightly as it goes by” and: “It causes what’s wet to dry While it moves along the sky” Yes, you DID sneak the Lord into this one also, but “I forgive you”. ha ha. this poem will be added to Section C of my/our “a showcase for PH poets” for November. thanks. bri ;) “ p.s. do i detect a relative's comment, below? i guess that is fair. :)

Truly it's nice poem about the sun Yes the sun knows its duty and its work is excellent.

A shining poem my friend!