Tuesday, January 5, 2010

The Story Of Little Johnny Comments

Rating: 4.8

The Newspaper boy walked up to the house
Only to find the door ajar and no one around
Unusual he thought, as little Johnny too
Was missing from his vantage point at the window
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Sandra Martyres
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Chuck Audette 27 May 2010

Interesting short story. Is it based on a real event? -chuck

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Kesav Easwaran 09 January 2010

good narration...you will fare better by moving over to fiction writing!

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Stephen Stirk 05 January 2010

A gripping piece which keeps you enthralled. Each few lines command that you read further in order to know the outcome. Well written and most enjoyable read. It seems that Christmas doesn't leave our minds until well into January. Best Regards Steve

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 January 2010

you kept me on my toes..engrossing narration...lovely write sandra after a short gap

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Indira Renganathan 05 January 2010

A good narration of a real story...exciting throughout....thanks Sandra

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