The Newspaper boy walked up to the house
Only to find the door ajar and no one around
Unusual he thought, as little Johnny too
Was missing from his vantage point at the window
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good narration...you will fare better by moving over to fiction writing!
A gripping piece which keeps you enthralled. Each few lines command that you read further in order to know the outcome. Well written and most enjoyable read. It seems that Christmas doesn't leave our minds until well into January. Best Regards Steve
you kept me on my toes..engrossing narration...lovely write sandra after a short gap
A good narration of a real story...exciting throughout....thanks Sandra
Interesting short story. Is it based on a real event? -chuck