Thursday, July 14, 2011

The Statue Maker Comments

Rating: 5.0

The death angels came to take a soul,
But the whole game appeared to be foul.
Thirteen alike persons standing in queue,
The real one they wanted, there’s no clue.
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S.D. TIWARI
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Rajnish Manga 24 January 2016

'The Statue Maker' is indeed an amazing and extra-ordinary piece of poetry, both on the basis of imagery as well as narrative. Like a good detective novel, the mystery was solved in the concluding part. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks.

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David s.w Johnson 27 July 2011

Good work. lots of strong imagery.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 July 2011

Nice effective poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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