Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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Godhra - Gujarat
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Tuesday, March 3, 2020

The Song Of Life:39. Withdrawn Be When The Senses Comments

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Withdrawn be when the senses frail
From faggots of fire that assail,
The relish still for them remains
When from desires the man abstains;
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Mahtab Bangalee 05 March 2020

The relish too should fore'er rest, Were he to sight the Soul Highest// great wisdom

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 March 2020

The wisdom is not mine, only the translation that has come out well. And you have a poet's eye to spot it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2020

You have very nicely translated the Sanskrit Shloka " viśhayā vinivartante nir-āhārasya dehinah | rasa-varjam rasah api asya param draśhţvā nivartate || 2/59 in English which says much about concentration of mind and to be way from.Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 March 2020

Your observations are to the point, dear KM, and thanks indeed.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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