The Moon's Whisper Poem by Ayatullah Nurjati

The Moon's Whisper

Rating: 4.8

The moon whispered to the sea,
'Tell me your deepest secrets.'
And the sea, with its waves dancing,
Revealed tales of lost ships,
Of sailors' dreams and mermaids' songs.

The moon listened, its silver glow
Caressing the water's surface.
It heard stories of love and longing,
Of storms that raged and calms that soothed,
Of tides that pulled hearts together.

In return, the moon shared its own secrets:
How it watched over lovers,
How it witnessed births and farewells,
How it wove threads of destiny
Across the vast expanse of night.

And so, the moon and the sea conversed,
Two celestial beings bound by mystery,
Their whispers echoing through time,
Creating tides of wonder and reflection,
Guiding hearts toward the infinite horizon.

As dawn approached, the moon retreated,
Leaving a trail of silver on the water.
The sea sighed, holding its secrets close,
And the night surrendered to the day,
But the memory of their conversation lingered,
A timeless dance between moon and sea.

©ayatullahnurjati @poemhutner.com

Pantai Pasir Putih Pulau Peucang, July 13,2024

Wednesday, July 17, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: silver,water,sea,timeless,dance,wonder,horizon,reflection,destiny,moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The moon always determines the tides and tides as if they had never cheated on each other and will always be faithful as long as the earth continues to orbit in this solar system.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vika Putri Amelia 24 July 2024

this such a amazing poem i've read. 😍

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Andra Aryaputra Andra 24 July 2024

This poem beautifully captures the enchanting dialogue between the moon and the sea. The imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a serene picture of their mystical exchange

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Goodd

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Alesia Dahniar Alesia 24 July 2024

wow, amazingg🔥

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M.Samsul Bachri Samsul 25 July 2024

This poem beautifully captures the enchanting dialogue between the moon and the sea. The imagery is vivid and evocative, painting a serene picture of their mystical exchange

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s.zaynab kamoonpury 25 November 2024

Impressive poem very imaginative. Kudos!

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Nadya Safhira 15 October 2024

The Moon's Whisper' by Ayatullah Nurjati depicts the beauty and mystery of the night through the whisper of the moon. The moon is a symbol of calm and inspiration, offering deep reflection on life.

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Nadya Safhira 15 October 2024

'The Moon's Whisper' by Ayatullah Nurjati depicts the beauty and mystery of the night through the whisper of the moon. The moon is a symbol of calm and inspiration, offering deep reflections on life, hope and love.

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alifiah khairunnisa nisa 15 October 2024

Ini adalah puisi yang luar biasa yang pernah saya baca, karena puisi tersebut Mengungkapkan kisah-kisah tentang kapal yang hilang, Tentang mimpi para pelaut dan lagu-lagu putri duyung.

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Aulia karina 14 October 2024

This poem beautifully captures the bond between the moon and the sea. Its vivid imagery and themes of love evoke nostalgia, leaving a lasting impression.

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