The Moment Of Ecstasy (The Saga Of My Sati-1) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Moment Of Ecstasy (The Saga Of My Sati-1)

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It was
The moment of ecstasy.

You were in my arms.
The peak of tenderness
The flux of warmth
The thrusts of desire
The drives of passion
Were over-flooding
Into the ultimate void
Of silence of space
And indifference of
Eternal time.

Wednesday, April 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sourav Banerjee 04 May 2016

You were in my arms. The peak of tenderness The flux of warmth The thrusts of desire The drives of passion Were over-flooding Into the ultimate void Of silence of space And indifference of Eternal time. Beautiful. well written.

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Alina Kaikeyi 02 November 2017

The drives of passion Were over-flooding Into the ultimate void Of silence of space And indifference of Eternal time. Great poem of love without sensuality. 10+++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 08 June 2016

You were in my arms. The peak of tenderness The flux of warmth The thrusts of desire The drives of passion Were over-flooding Into the ultimate void Of silence of space And indifference of Eternal time. Beautiful expression of divine love.

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Sabita Sahoo 31 May 2016

You were in my arms. The peak of tenderness The flux of warmth The thrusts of desire The drives of passion Were over-flooding Into the ultimate void Of silence of space And indifference of Eternal time. Nice poem. Loved the expressiveness.Erotic..Thrilling.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 May 2016

So sensual. This is the perfect moment of ecstasy. You write really well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 May 2016

Over-flooding! With the muse of sweet love. Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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