Chan Mongol

Chan Mongol

East Bengal (Bangladesh)
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Chan Mongol
East Bengal (Bangladesh)
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Wednesday, June 6, 2018

The Little Sun Comments

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He is the source of all kind of energy
For this earth, for you and for me!
He has to control the earth, the Moon!
Soil, water, air, fire and every season!
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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2018

Chan, such a brilliant write...10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2018

This amazing little sun grows with tenderness and shines and becomes old. This old little sun does magic here. We have to learn many things from sun. In any form ding offence is so sad really. All should stay away from this. This poem is thoughtful and thought provoking...10

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Chan Mongol

Chan Mongol

East Bengal (Bangladesh)
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