***! ! The Kid Inside Me*# Comments

well now! this was a rather insightful poem. the person that we want to be, locked away deep down inside! i loved your reference to the old era of kings and knaves. brilliantly tied in. blessed be, Fallon

Well written, I like. Don't ever forget the child in you, because it is your real self, the witness of all you do. It is the voice that wrote this poem, yest it is the poet. Loved your thoughts keep writing. A 10+ from Bob

our ambitions and our vissions about our future is just a written plan for our lives its what we are pre-distened for by God, I like this poem its explicite the reality about me. nice one!

Nkulu this was a wonderful read - thank you. Why when we grow up do we feel we have to lose our original personality. If only the whole world could find their inner child again what an amazing world it would be :) 10/10

oh, I believe poem is your way,

You portray him in such a way that I want to be around him. Lovely use of words to portray confidence. Enjoyed it alot.

Now I love this poem, The self Confidence of Youth, you're going to live forever and that's gods truth, life comes as a hard learned truth... Andrew 10