The Girl In My Life Poem by Raja Bhandari

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The Girl In My Life

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But I wonder, how gracefully you spun the cob-web of lies,
You wrapped the most severe heartbreaks inside all the ' hi 's!

Such as a baby kicks inside the mother's womb, you always kicked from inside on my heart's wall,
May it be the dusk, or may it be the dawn, you didn't forget in my heart to crawl!

You were something very beautiful, like that on a clear sky, the morning sunrise and the evening sunset,
But the days became windy soon, and the monsoon of tears in my life started to onset!

You seemed to be a candle in my dark world, in actual, you were a matchstick,
Burned brightly at first, but the temporary light didn't last, and I became lovesick!

Wednesday, October 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Burned brightly at first, but the temporary light didn't last I reached for your next poem getting inspired by your first poem..as I fell in love with this emerging poet. But what next? When am I going to read the net dear? However,10+++ for this lovely lovelorn poem. Regards. Your fellow poet, Subhas

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Raja Bhandari 14 October 2017

Thanks Subhash sir 😊 I am working on my next work. I will be producing it here soon😊

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2017

Kickinf of wall of your hearts by your beloved makes it a very endearing poem. Loved the write

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Raja Bhandari 14 October 2017

Thank you so much sir for your kind look at my work. glad you liked it. 😊

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