Daniel Brick

Daniel Brick

St. Paul MN
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Tuesday, June 12, 2018

The Day After I Turned 71 Comments

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I can't hold on to things securely.
They drop to the floor at unexpected
moments. I am walking to the door
that leads to another room, and
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Galina Italyanskaya 23 June 2018

Love this one too! Each age threshold brings its own doubts and questions, it's true.

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Glen Kappy 18 June 2018

my first thoughts, daniel, are of things related to aging. but then the last sentence resonates, seeming itself is a kind of reality. it is indeed. but in this time of fake news and alternative facts we need to remember that the seeming has to be placed against objective reality, as best we can discern it. years ago it struck me that in scripture significant weight is put on eyewitness testimony—primary sources speaking historically. appreciating your metacognition, glen

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Nosheen Irfan 14 June 2018

Great depth. A book dropping is not as simple as it seems. When things begin to slip out of our hands, we have two choices, either to move on without them or exert ourselves to hold them again. With aging, we might lose grip on things physically but mentally we are much stronger, at par with a book that contains wisdom. To lend such depth to an apparently trivial incident of routine life, you deserve applause. Amazing!

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Liza Sudina 13 June 2018

What was the book?

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Rini shibu 12 June 2018

Great and touching lines about aging

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2018

Happy belated birthday, Daniel. Age is a cruel joke. It brings experience, wisdom and knowledge. It also brings deterioration of physicality. At 60, I am stronger than most 20 year old people, but only half as strong as I was at 30. What's worse is I have memory lapses as well. Here's to a graceful next few decades.

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Lyn Paul 12 June 2018

There are so many wonderful things about aging such as more time, wisdom and travel. When your body fails you it is incredibly difficult to enjoy the simple things. Happy Birthday Daniel.

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