Luana Del Lobo

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Sunday, July 13, 2014

The Crown Of Salt Comments

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The yellow of the light
Penetrates into the volatile waters
The sea is a tear that burns the face
When he bathes in the ocean.
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Maria C. Pires Costa 28 August 2015

Beautifully crafted thread! I so much enjoy imagery used here. Thanks for sharing, dear Luana.

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Sandra Feldman 23 July 2014

Deliciously vivid and salty. Originality, at its salty best, Plus the excellence of all the rest! Absolutly Amazing

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Neela Nath Das 14 July 2014

A beautiful poem.....

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 July 2014

The sea is a tear that burns the face Salty water of the ocean is a collection of tears. Nicely put. Thank you.

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