DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

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Sunday, September 28, 2014

The Caged Bird Comments

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The caged bird
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This world is cruel and bitter
You have taken away their eyes
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Paul Sebastian 01 October 2014

Great write. Many of us are entrapped in our pride or ego and that has shackled us from becoming what we could become otherwise. Nice portrayal of of the cost of loss for egocentrics.

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Salini Nair 30 September 2014

we are always in a cage created by ego and selfishness....................nice...

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Valsa George 29 September 2014

Break free of the ropes that bind....! All of us are cocooned in our own narrow self without ever coming out into the wider world of freedom and the limitless possibilities it entails! Unfortunately the chains with which we are manacled are not given by any external agent of authority, but by ourselves, our ego! If we can kill our bloated ego, we will be able to breathe freely! Great write Deepak!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 September 2014

yes poet, we allow ourselves to be imprisoned with our narrowness and self-centered views.

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