Sunday, June 18, 2017

That One Small Worry Comments

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That one small worry does lead to one bigger does seem true to say
And worrying from you will not keep worries away
But suppose it is hard to feel happy when you are feeling down
And one of the poor on your side of the town
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Francis Duggan
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Jefferson Carter 18 June 2017

Francis, you obviously are enthusiastic about verse. If you want to improve as a formal poet, you need to learn about meter. Rhymes by themselves don't create a good poem. Maybe read Paul Fussell's Poetic Meter and Poetic Form, a good book about elements of formal verse. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks. Yrs, JC

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