Melissa Broomhead

Melissa Broomhead

Pheonix AZ
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Pheonix AZ
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Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Tainted Refuge Comments

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in my dreams im lost in a sea
of happiness and joy

numb to the feelings of the outside
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Melissa Broomhead
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Strong poetry... I love it.

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David Darbyshire 01 August 2006

Nice write Mel. Love dave xxx

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Alley Bell 01 August 2006

I like this poem. It has real meaning to it. Real deep. I love it how you make dreaming seem like torture with out that one person, rather that joyful when you were with him. Nicely done :)

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Melissa Broomhead

Melissa Broomhead

Pheonix AZ
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