Thursday, May 29, 2014

Sweet Desire Comments

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I have a desire, through my life

It can be a joke or a sad story
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amir mohammad islami chalandar
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To have a house in your heart is the only desire longed for............what a divine thought.............very nice

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John Tiong Chunghoo 14 June 2014

lovely poem my friend. carry on writing. that is the only way to become good my friend.

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Young Church Poetry 10 June 2014

Its a wonderful desire and having it forever is the sweetest thing. Great work, I like it.

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Captain Cur 07 June 2014

If we all had small houses in other men's hearts there would be no fighting. Good theory.

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