My heart is weakening
For I am watching you there
In my mind
The memories haunt me,
As my eyes closed for the night
Are you happy?
I know you are watching
So, don't worry about me,
I am being taken care of
A nice poem involving a bit of mystery. Whom are you watching in your mind? Good work.
That last line is really brilliant. Depending on how it's taken, it can give this verse a vibe of despair, or a tone of optimism and hope. Excellent verse, LeeAnn,
Sounds like a failed love. It can truly weaken the heart.
Your wonderful poem is so inspiring in its positivity, LeeAnn.
Keeping an eye on each other. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent short work.....thank u.... LeeAnn..