Stolen Moments Comments

So....long..the day.......so...short..the hour Stolen.....moments....angst.............. deceit beautiful!

I completely relate to this poem and I love the manner in which it was written. Thank you for sharing.

Hey James: In this poem I see so many situations that could be termed in this way. How many young people could equate with the thoughts implied. Well written. Adeline

The stolen moments of an illicit love beautifully expressed.

Yes - I consider the poem to be excellent; the way you have spaced out the words, giving the reader time to thoroughly take in the meaning. Joyce.

beautiful. you too have managed to turn infidelity from a sin to pure love and give it credence.well done.

so true.. I love how you set this up it is nice i like how you typed it makes the reader really understand what they are reading.. great work Krista

I like the fact that you are experimenting with spaces. This is a bit hard to do with PH's limitations.

Beautiful poem - excellent writing. Predecessors wrote so a lot that it was possible only to join them. I will be coming back in order to make oneself acquainted with your artistic work. I like it. Greetings for you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

I think James that with 40 comments already on your poem there is nothing new that I can say except its a fine poem. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

wow, a peom I could have written but YOU wrote it! ! ! Great!

Reading this fills me with feelings. Deep love shared seems so momentary and evasive, difficult to capture again, only to be remembered and dreamed about. We keep changing. The longing keeps us hoping and desiring. Well done.

Sounds like forbidden love to me.Sometimes folks marrybecause they think they are in love only to find real love later.Then they must make do with stolen moments. Nicely presented my friend a thinkers poem

Very lovely opening lines, 'So far away.. ' Nice construction and perfect harmony, almost like a song. Great work.

Very much a poem by 'heart'. lovely piece of work friend

I'm glad you showed me this one...it's beautiful...I can't think of anything else to say right now...I'm speechless.. Hugs, Dee

this poem resonates and touches me in a very mysterious way...inspiring!

good morning, yes lovely, not sad, i like the bittersweet. last word. autumn, mature, not spring so young. it is not sad because of the dreams in a future time. and there is no concrete place. the place is of desire erupting. love transcending time and space very nice, thank you

I love your use of spacing...deep thoughts emerging from those spaces...10+

''Stolen moments........bittersweet'. A perfect description of an imperfect situation. You express it so truthfully and with great insight. 'Two woven lives' - it is a mystery how this happens, but it does, and when it does, it is very beautiful, yet also very painful if the two aren't meant to be together. Tenderly written. Linda