Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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Belle Wassermeister
Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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Wednesday, August 21, 2019

Should I Spank Him? Comments

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My Junior doesn't stand up anymore;
he doesn't get excited as before.
Oh, I can coax that boy all day,
but he refuses to obey.
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Bri Edwards 02 March 2020

p.s. YES, SPANK THE OUT OF HIM, if THAT IS ALL YOU CAN " do for" HIM.

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Michael Walker 11 February 2020

I can imagine it would be a trial at times to bring up a boy. I hear them calling out loudly in or near supermarkets.

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Paul Brookes 22 August 2019

A witty poem enjoyed of course read on a superficial level that is all the poem is however reading the subtext between the line if you like is a longing for things passed to have things as they used to be. It is our human frailty to deal with change whilst wishing everything stayed the same. Thanks for your comments on four vibrations they actually are just whimsy sort being playful with words but really they mean very little.

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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