She Is Afraid, That He Is Tired. Comments

He's left..without..love.. and one sun that smiled God's love lass..and yes.. now he's tired... a poem of symbolism...... very fine and deep. tony

Brilliant! Great write!

brilliant! ! ! thats the only word i can think of

touching... and has a flow that softly caress the heart 10+++ lovelots, Maia

The poet emphasizes the essential ideas in depth background of this beautiful poem of symbolism.10+++

well said and written...great poem to ponder....10

Does he tire from her fear? Does she fear from his weary mind? Do they love sincere? Are they so inclined? So much beauty in you. :)

beautifullllllllllllllll poemmmmmmmmmmmmm