Beyond the distant shores of seven seas,
Her sparkling smiles still in my memory,
I hear her whisper in the morning breeze,
Like melodious tunes of whispering bee;
I feel her presence in the winds of time,
Like fragrance in the garden of jasmine,
Her smile was like thousand words of gold,
Every minute spent was like lovers abode;
Her smile accompanied dimple on her cheeks
My heart with missed beats for a while it shrinks
The anxiety compounds with bounds and leaps
Those deep reverine eyes with a stare, seem to peep;
She came with motley hopes and greenery,
Kindling heart like the oars in placid reverine,
Her smiles and whispers are in my heart’s granary,
Which shall remain with me in my deep memory;
its a good start....and youll improve ill advise you to read some classical poets like keats and wordsworth...otherwise a nice effort
wow....i was reading it with my breath held..........it is beautiful......10! ! (is it really for me?)
This poem itself show how much you love ur wife she s very lucky to have you in her life keep writing for your sweet wife kudos 10
This beautiful poem echoed so many of my poems, viz. WE ARE NEARING SHORE, WE'LL MEET etc. The structure is so good, words wonderfulllllllll.10
wow I feel yur presence in the garden of jasmines--is this really for me tooooooooo! ! ! ! ! ! +10 regards anjali (read mine ANSWER-WHY DO U LOVE ME)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a poem full of hearts! :) Nice one!