Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Seperation Comments

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We walk this earth blind
without seeing what is really there
every step we take, premeditated
if we try to look what is inside
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Kasia Fedyk
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Valerie Dohren 19 July 2012

We need to reach into higher realms to escape our self-made confines. Lovely work.

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Neela Nath Das 19 July 2012

Profound thought.It's right once wall is built between two loving hearts, it's tough to break it. Loved it Kasi--Nil

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Neela Nath Das 19 July 2012

Profound thought.The wall between the two looving hearts once built can't get broken.This is the tragedy of separation.Loved it Kasi.--Nil.

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Hamid Negah 19 July 2012

Dear Kasia Fedyk nice writting it is the truth of our life and we should destroy like these walls.

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Eric Cockrell 18 July 2012

all seperation and distance be but an illusion created by our fearing egos!

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