Saturday, October 6, 2007

Rules Of Grammar And Nakedness Concealed Behind The A And The T Comments

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I pay little mind to anything else in the room where I’m “at”
The clock’s ticking or the water dripping doesn’t distract
Me from believing that she is still the answer to my prayers
And she will be mine forever as long as I can own her scent
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Ted Sheridan
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You're not a virgin? I'm falling over myself here. Next you'll tell me Father Christmas doesn't exist. Stop breaking the illusions1 Ted.... I love it. t x

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x... x... 06 October 2007

Sounds like your passion may have slipped over into that 'L' word.....great write. mm.xo

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for a moment i thought of courtney kane, ,10

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Ronald Stroman 06 October 2007

my dirty minded fingers. i should cut off my hands when they get together. they actually make me touch strange women, when my 'thoughts' are on some good lookin' woman. and that's when... i 'actually' send my body to help out and get on it too. one word to describe... my dirty minded fingers... HORNY. lol take care.

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