Romeo And Juliet Poem by Rini Shibu

Rini Shibu

Rini Shibu

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Romeo And Juliet

Rating: 5.0


He filled the ink of his pen
with tears that rolled down her cheeks
Touched the nib on her heart
to turn her sorrows into glee
The girl who bloomed his world
have done magic on his pen
He started scribbling songs
expressing his love
and spilled the ink for us to read

Saturday, October 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sakalabaktula Sairaj 06 November 2017

superb and fantastic you so nice Dear

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Rini Shibu 06 November 2017

Thanks once again for visiting this poem Sairaj

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 November 2017

A very sweet little poem that touches the core of your heart. Wonderfully expressed Rini He started scribbling songs expressing his love and spilled the ink for us to read Specially, loved the last three lines. A huge 10 for you

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Rini Shibu 02 November 2017

Thanks for your sweet comment Geetha

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 October 2017

Powerful imagination Rini..! The gathered ink touching the nib and subsequently turning the sorrows into glee... both Romeo and Juliet have been beautifully narrated in a subtle manner.. Loved your poem..!!

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Rini Shibu 28 October 2017

Thanks Dillip for your comments Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2017

Tear is ink which touches the heart as nib. A beautiful metaphorical poem on love shared amazingly.10

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Rini Shibu 28 October 2017

Thanks Kumar for reading this poem

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