Ronald Doku

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Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Robbery At The Bank Of My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hopes and dreams set ablaze
Feet treading down a path the mind fears
Thoughts cursed with images of the one the heart yearns
And memories that refuse to let bygones be bygones
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Angelic Warrior 26 August 2009

that has got to hurt......to be robed of everything under the sun.....nice poem though.....pretty interesting :)

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Candace Johnson 17 July 2009

nice.... creative....differnt...great write

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Sally Carter 16 July 2009

Clever imagery - I have never seen the heart represented like this before. I like it.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 July 2009

I need a financial expert to manage my assets.I can see your good at it.Nice piece Ronald.

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Tracey Wynn 07 July 2009

I enjoyed reading this poem. You wrote it well. It is different than most I have read and I like it. I give it a 10.

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