Rivers And Streams Poem by Brown mbadiwe

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Rivers And Streams

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1. With each golden breath, the life goes by, counting the cost we glow by.
Down, rivers and streams

2. A pity, pretty party galore.A glamour untold, so many adversary unfaced.
Down, rivers and streams

3. Playing with pipes, we forget the times. Our crazy times, good and bad I leave by a moment
Down, rivers and streams

4. Pick your times, I do mine, with hopeful heart it hides a tear.
Down, rivers and streams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 20 July 2023

Thought-music to savor. Glowing and breathing golden air, counting costs, turning away from foes, playing with pipes, leaving moments behind...picking our times on rivers and streams.

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Kingsley Egbukole 01 September 2023

We pass through my things and people in life that sometimes we forget some of the things and people we have encountered. Captivating poem.

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Prasanna Kumari 18 January 2024

Human life linked with rivers and streams is interesting to read

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Wale Adekoya 05 January 2024

Captivating and thought provoking.

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Ajit Saigal 27 September 2024

Life flows like rivers, both sweet and bitter, In laughter and tears, moments glimmer and glitter. Each choice shapes the tale, a journey's quiet glitter.

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Elisha Eddie 24 May 2024

This is truly emotions collected in tranuility. A good write. Keep the flag flying!

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Mike Monahan 30 April 2024

Nice one!

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William Alexander 10 March 2024

Such as time. Our rivers and streams. As though life seems Enjoyed!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 07 February 2024

There is the hopeful heart lives positively

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