Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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Tribhawan Kaul
Srinagar (J & K) India
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Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Realization (A Senryu) Comments

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Gatecrashers
Senses and self will
Conscience, acting as bouncers
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Heather Wilkins 30 May 2013

yes this is a very nice senryu. sometimes we must act as bouncers

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Louis Cecile 31 July 2012

A good senryu. The metaphor of bouncers is a interesting concept.

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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