Realising The Dream Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Realising The Dream

Rating: 5.0

Let's build a better world
One with clean, blue skies
And a cool breeze
As the rain heals the soul without acid
We swim in the unpolluted ocean
With the dolphins and whales
If the earth cures itself
The birds would fly away without a care
Not choking on smog
Or eating poisionous fish
We can realise the dream
If we stop the chaos

Tuesday, November 7, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: environment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 07 November 2023

This is a precious piece.......well penned...

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M. Asim Nehal 07 November 2023

Awesome poem TFS....Liked it 5*****

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 November 2023

We can realise the dream If we stop the chaos....You are absolutely correct. Well penned.

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Richard Wlodarski 07 November 2023

LeeAnn, I love the optimism, and idealism, of this beautiful poem. I've always wanted to swim with the dolphins. Gonna make it happen in 2024!

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Kim Barney 07 November 2023

I've said it before and I say it again: I like the way you dream, LeeAnn.

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Indira Renganathan 10 November 2023

'We can realise the dream If we stop the chaos''... true. a nice poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 November 2023

This excellent poem goes to My Favourites. TFS, LeeAnn.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 November 2023

I CITE YOU: We can realise the dream If we stop the chaos. This can never be realised, methinks, dear LeeAnn, but we can have a TRY

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 November 2023

I do not like CHAOS, LeeAnn, and.............I cannot swim, only dive in the deepest sea. This is amazingly worded, said and shouted, LeeAnn. Presented in full brilliance. TOP Marks 5 Stars All.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 November 2023

I just love the way you've written this! .. Beyond #ing! .. Beyond Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

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