Let's build a better world
One with clean, blue skies
And a cool breeze
As the rain heals the soul without acid
We swim in the unpolluted ocean
With the dolphins and whales
If the earth cures itself
The birds would fly away without a care
Not choking on smog
Or eating poisionous fish
We can realise the dream
If we stop the chaos
We can realise the dream If we stop the chaos....You are absolutely correct. Well penned.
LeeAnn, I love the optimism, and idealism, of this beautiful poem. I've always wanted to swim with the dolphins. Gonna make it happen in 2024!
I've said it before and I say it again: I like the way you dream, LeeAnn.
'We can realise the dream If we stop the chaos''... true. a nice poem
This excellent poem goes to My Favourites. TFS, LeeAnn.
I CITE YOU: We can realise the dream If we stop the chaos. This can never be realised, methinks, dear LeeAnn, but we can have a TRY
I do not like CHAOS, LeeAnn, and.............I cannot swim, only dive in the deepest sea. This is amazingly worded, said and shouted, LeeAnn. Presented in full brilliance. TOP Marks 5 Stars All.
I just love the way you've written this! .. Beyond #ing! .. Beyond Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a precious piece.......well penned...