Read me and i'll tell you,
Of secrets hidden,
Dark things shrouded,
To the world forbidden,
Regrets buried,
Under heart and stone,
Never told nor given away,
Forevermore, always unknown,
Carrying always,
The backbreaking shame,
Of troubles past,
With you to blame
Short but soulful poem. The last stanza has to be my favourite. But most importantly I just love the rhyme. Those regrets will always be unknown if you've never shared them with someone. All in all it's very good.
kieran thats awesome i love it x can u please post sick on ur name pretty please x
Revelation held in words. Well penned friend! ; D
Very powerful poem in just a few lines- I like it especially because I can really identify with the feelings that the poem evoked- good job! C
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem Kieran, the rhythm was smooth and expressions were great, nicely done.