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She became a piece of flesh for their fun No one saw the beauty of her heart But the embellished garments and her style captured their sight.....lonely charm and laughing about herself.. dev

Wow, so nice! . Losing or winning? It really depends on the inside. Even in difficult situations we can adopt a winning attitude. Loved it so much.

She walked back and looked at the mirror Asked herself whether a loser or winner Then laughed at her lonely charm Which put trust in any arms........so moving and interesting. A beautiful poem with nice imagery shared amazingly.10

Hi Rini, Beauty of a woman Is judged by man, not woman On the shape of her body Not on fragrance of her soul. His taste decides What should wear, She dresses up for him Even today, what progress!

This is a great and thought provoking poem.

An interesting poem.. Would she put trust in any arms? I would think she would because of her lonely charms. Great imagery in this one.

Nice poem Rini.++10- - - -