Rains Of Peace Comments

I love the picture it brought to mind because the poem played a short story inside. Great Poem.

nice imagery of words u drew... :)

nature imagery weaved well with opaque theme...well done

Koyel, Please forgive my lack of professional courtesy in not commenting on your poems sooner. I too enjoyed RAINS OF PEACE. I liked the idea of putting both the Sun and Clouds into the same ring, and letting them go at it! This time the clouds won! I'll be watching for the re-match! your friend Mike

short simple and sweet

A real good one. I gave a 10. Ron

In short said a lot, the style of presentation fine, so.......10+

Wow! This is one is really a good one. The persona here is like almost celebrating the triumph of its desire. A 10 for this one.

quite a moving craft the poet in u is soaked in the beauty of words caryyin the thought along

a very deep imaginary write....i like it and hoping for that rain of peace pour sooner on this earth....i give it 10+ thanks

Hi How dramatic the weather can be and you have captured it in action so well. A good read Regards Dave T.

Though the theme looks a simple one, you managed, with your imagination to make it a symbolic and meaningful. Two supposed to be enemies (clouds and sun) in the end they mix their energy to produce something (rain) positive (peace) . I give it a 9+, thanks to your amazing method to paint and energise your message. (I am also glad that I am using an abundance of imagination in my own poems) . Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded

Koel, u really have a great imagination power. U know how to dramatize a simple, everyday affair. The obvious sign of a great poet. Keep enriching the world of poems.

Wonderful, a Rain of Peace....10

A soothing rainscape of peace after that war in the sky. Your poems should appeal to young and old alike. Love, SandraX

lovely poem.some reason for such poem?

You personalize the elements of sun and cloud with originality and style in this fine poem. A metaphor for something more personal, perhaps? love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I liked this one and I recommend it. The creative aspect is usually critical for a poems memory. This one has such creativity. GW62

I love the way this poet write and its simplicity streak of lightning forked across the sky, heavy rumbling thunder pouring on the earth

Oooo man, I loved peace.Peace be to the world! Thanks for the piece.