Thanks Bri for reading. I think the line 13 is exactly what I meant unless you coul elaborate on your suggestion. You have sharper eyes and brain for edit than I. Here is my senryu to your four lines
my mind is large
I understand it all
but I have no heart'
Of course that would be a robot not Bri.
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Is line 13 the way you mean it to be? I wonder if there may be a typo? I have no heart. My mind is small. I understand, not at All! : ( Bri :)
Thanks Bri for reading. I think the line 13 is exactly what I meant unless you coul elaborate on your suggestion. You have sharper eyes and brain for edit than I. Here is my senryu to your four lines my mind is large I understand it all but I have no heart' Of course that would be a robot not Bri.