Savita Tyagi

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Thursday, April 13, 2017

Poetry And Language (Senryu Series) Comments

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Poetry is not
About perfection but
About expression.
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Bri Edwards 21 April 2017

Is line 13 the way you mean it to be? I wonder if there may be a typo? I have no heart. My mind is small. I understand, not at All! : ( Bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 22 April 2017

Thanks Bri for reading. I think the line 13 is exactly what I meant unless you coul elaborate on your suggestion. You have sharper eyes and brain for edit than I. Here is my senryu to your four lines my mind is large I understand it all but I have no heart' Of course that would be a robot not Bri.

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