Herbert Nehrlich

Herbert Nehrlich

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Wednesday, November 23, 2005

Plum's Destiny Comments

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A little plum dropped from the tree
and struck a frog upon his knee.
The frog did hurt and cried a lot
the plum said Oops, I plum forgot.
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Ernestine Northover 23 November 2005

In comparison to the frog, I should think that 'plum' was more like a huge boulder. Poor chap, I bet it made him 'hop'. Love Ernestine. Nice write, I enjoyed it.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 23 November 2005

This would make a good children's story Herbert....very nice!

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Mary Nagy 23 November 2005

I loved it Herbert! How cute...........another one that would make a great childrens picture book! :) Sincerely, Mary

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