If you are dumb enough to keep
piranhas in your bathtub
Don't complain when your butt
becomes their dinner grub
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I see it as 4 beats - piranhas in your bathtub - becomes their dinner grub
The title seemed SO familiar. Could it REALLY be that I read and commented on it already, less than 6 months ago? ? ? ? Incredible if true.
Getting a laugh for a change. Thanks for the originality and teaching humor of this poem.
Loved this powerful poem. The allegorical paint is marvellous. The poet's note and his answers to Sylvia answer the queries that the readers may have. Nice one. Enjoyed the subtle humour too.
Any fish who dares to chew on my will soon find will soon find out what it's like to lie in my frying pan. bri : )
The Hell with allegories, ....though alleGORIES does sort of fit this poem.
Thank you. Sorry I didn't reply earlier. For the last few days, I forgot to look at the comments on all my poems.
A wonderful poem with a meaningful message tinged with humor. A well crafted write.
Who are the people? One of them is a scammer and another is a very greedy man.
WHO are they? The people.......Poem full of enjoyment.
Sorry. I thought I had replied to you, but I just realized that the message was too verbose for this format and did not get sent to you. So I will now answer your question in 2 parts.
The scammer was and still is his employee. He is still blinded by her promises and still loosing a lot of money.
I have known this gentleman for almost 35 years. He refuses to listen to any common sense as to what she is doing.
You are absolutely RIGHT! Great truth, you really wonder how the level of decency, morality and truth has gone so Low!
Thank you. I was thinking, perhaps we should pull their teeth before letting them swim in the tub? Any thoughts on this?
I love your sense of humour, it's great to laugh at life......