Jim McGill

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Friday, January 6, 2023

Piranhas In Your Bathtub Comments

Rating: 4.6

If you are dumb enough to keep
piranhas in your bathtub
Don't complain when your butt
becomes their dinner grub
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Ruth Walters 20 August 2023

I love your sense of humour, it's great to laugh at life......

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M. Asim Nehal 12 June 2023

Yeah they will be -less afterwards.

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

I'd use 'tub', not 'bathtub', for smoothness in reading. 4 stars

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Jim McGill 09 June 2023

I see it as 4 beats - piranhas in your bathtub - becomes their dinner grub

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Bri Edwards 23 May 2023

The title seemed SO familiar. Could it REALLY be that I read and commented on it already, less than 6 months ago? ? ? ? Incredible if true.

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Jim McGill 09 June 2023

Yup! Yuh did.

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Sandra Feldman 13 February 2023

Getting a laugh for a change. Thanks for the originality and teaching humor of this poem.

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Loved this powerful poem. The allegorical paint is marvellous. The poet's note and his answers to Sylvia answer the queries that the readers may have. Nice one. Enjoyed the subtle humour too.

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Bri Edwards 01 February 2023

Any fish who dares to chew on my will soon find will soon find out what it's like to lie in my frying pan. bri : )

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Jim McGill 09 February 2023

Great. Me too.

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Bri Edwards 01 February 2023

The Hell with allegories, ....though alleGORIES does sort of fit this poem.

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Jim McGill 09 February 2023

Pretty good. I love it.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 January 2023

lol I love the metaphor jim Bravo! ! ! !

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Jim McGill 09 February 2023

Thank you. Sorry I didn't reply earlier. For the last few days, I forgot to look at the comments on all my poems.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 31 January 2023

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message tinged with humor. A well crafted write.

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Jim McGill 09 February 2023

Thank you

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

Who are the people? One of them is a scammer and another is a very greedy man.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 January 2023

WHO are they? The people.......Poem full of enjoyment.

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

Sorry. I thought I had replied to you, but I just realized that the message was too verbose for this format and did not get sent to you. So I will now answer your question in 2 parts.

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

The scammer was and still is his employee. He is still blinded by her promises and still loosing a lot of money.

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

I have known this gentleman for almost 35 years. He refuses to listen to any common sense as to what she is doing.

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

Thank you very much for your input. I appreciate it.

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Sandra Feldman 07 January 2023

You are absolutely RIGHT! Great truth, you really wonder how the level of decency, morality and truth has gone so Low!

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Jim McGill 10 January 2023

Thank you. I was thinking, perhaps we should pull their teeth before letting them swim in the tub? Any thoughts on this?

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