Sunday, March 30, 2014

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By the time we realise
why we are born
we will be at the last part of the play
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Mary Amrutha
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Very enlightening phrases. It is like a shadows of truth in realization. Thumbs up Kindly visit my simple poems. Thank you

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Daniel Brick 11 April 2014

The realization we may not have enough time to complete our understanding of life before we have to check out is profoundly disturbing. But in a sense you're poem of realization warns us to prepare NOW because we only have the present moment. Once again poetry saves us by expressing a timely truth for us all.

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Hans Vr 31 March 2014

Deep reflections on the essence of life. Let us search for the ultimate meaning of life so intensely that we get a bit closer to it as early as possible Good poem

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Colleen Courtney 30 March 2014

Very true! Spend so much time wondering our purpose here and know deep down that the answer will only be shown when I pass from this life. Nicely written!

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Mary Amrutha

Mary Amrutha

Ernakulam, kerala, India
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