IF WORDS A PICTURE PAINT
AND MUSIC IS MAGIC
TAKING US
OUT OF OURSELVES
THEN EYES, OUR EYES
MEETING FOR THE FIRST TIME
OPEN OUR INNER MUSIC'S PATH
CLOSING THE GAP BETWEEN US
COMPLETING US
OUR HUMAN INTENT TAPPED
WE ARE CONNECTED
BONDED FOR ALL TIME
It is nice poem with a beautiful dimension. I love it and added my 10. However, all capitals are a bit......
You have a romantic heart, and it flows from your pen to write words that entice us all. Very well done; -)
Beautiful thought... I don't care if all alphabets are in capitals... As long as I can grasp the core of this poem, I don't mind breaking any rules... As I believe that there are no rules in poetry... Flow is wonderful... It connects our true inner self to our so called fake conscious... and at same time this bond spreads like an infectious disease... I wish there would be a Pandemic of such infectious connectivity through human souls, and poets like you can help us revitalize this connectivity in this world of dying humanity... Regards, Kamran
yes when the eyes start to converse...a music of love we start hearing from within...an expressive poem
Carol, our eyes are indeed the mirrors of our souls... captured beautifully by your pen... Brilliant Alf
wow! ! ! its beautiful. Your poem is small but very true. I truly believe that eyes --the connector-- to that gate of love. A+ and 10+ regards anjali
through music, love can be tasted and sensed. if we are in love, our world become music hall. and our hearts are the musicians. very expressive in simple way! keep writing!
hi sweety, i love ur poem it is very nice.your father must be proud of u.u have a real talent.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'We are connected...bonded for all time'..... Excellent passage... Please read 'Ecstasy.'