Friday, April 28, 2017

Open Wounds Comments

Rating: 5.0

... Since wound there must be.
Robert Browning

You have to be really cautious now.
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Daniel Brick
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Nosheen Irfan 03 May 2017

A wonderful philosophical write that probes time in its constant flux and the limitations of humans. True that a mortal human cannot detach himself from his past ever. And we must make a choice if we want to heal. Future though unknown always carries a probability of healing n better times. Through the time frame of our mortal existence, we are always going through hurt n healing alternately. A profound work that captures the dilemma of a mortal life so well but at the same time giving a message of hope....yes, we do recover from the wounds. A super 10.

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 April 2017

What a poetic lines! You are simply a mortal human, and must carry your pasts with you forever.Thanks for sharing here.

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