Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

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Saturday, September 9, 2017

Once The Storm Starts Comments

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It does not see who is guilty and who is not
Like a mad elephant who has lost his spouse
It demolishes all whether a palace or a hut
Multi storied high building or a little house.
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Valsa George 30 September 2017

Nice comparison of the hurricanes to an elephant on rampage! Very spot on ! The recent hurricanes have left a trail of destruction especially in the Carribean Islands!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 17 September 2017

It is when natural disasters happen that's when we realise how powerless we are. Once the storm begins then huge structures collapse like toys. Then, what of man who can be hurled like a leaf into the sky. Nature is deaf and dumb and blind activist Mostly kind but often an unkind terrorist. Most effectively picturised! Thank you Akhtar Sahab! Full Vote

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Hazel Durham 11 September 2017

Nature can be our enemy at times and it is a formidable foe, like Harvey and Irma that destroys without mercy! Love this beautifully crafted poem!

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Khalid Saifullah 10 September 2017

Nature is supreme and even the super powers of this worls are helpless before nature.

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Rini Shibu 09 September 2017

Well written poem on natural calamities..10

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