Old Man Poem by Bright Stars 27

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Old Man

Rating: 4.5


I see your pain,
why can't I reach out

I am enclosed in a land of darkness,
After so long, I've finally seen the light

Will you forgive the time I took finding my way,
Will you open to a new beginning that can overwrite the bad times

I miss who we could have been,
I want to give you the joy that you once dreamed of

I lay my demons down,
they are slayed

I bow to a higher cause,
that of being a ray of light

I love you, old man,
in all my hate, and regrets,
I really love you

Tuesday, September 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: demons,father,sad
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Jazib Kamalvi 05 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Bright. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 September 2017

a good one your 1st here.. keep on! welcome at PH

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Bright Star 05 September 2017

Thank you so much! It's very encouraging: D

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