Ode To Pirate Sun, Sea, Wind And Rain Comments
Pleasant intermittent rhythms
voiceless smiles that transverse space
sunlight plays in raindrop prisms
each one falls to intrigue my face.
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Ohhh Captain, you melt evening colors to fill in reader's heart...so we can feel all things, glad i am your crew so i can experienced this myself my captain _Soul
Oh! What a beautiful poem describing the Sea Wind and Rain and the verses are alluring ! I read and re-read to completely comprehend the loveliness ! Thanks for sharing, Captain!
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6/12/2025 8:22:13 AM # 1.0.0
Oh Captain, my Captain! This write bought a rush of adrenaline. Through your description of the elements and nature you took me to a place of complete relaxation in your poem. Written with beauty, rhyme and rhythm. Loved it.