Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Now It's Your Turn Africa Comments

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Everyone has touched the apex of time,
I see with joy climax of time,
The clock struck all parts of the planet,
Now I listen to the drums and clarinet,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Savita Tyagi 06 December 2014

Great poem. Inshallah to your wish!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2014

Great work! And i do thank you for dedicating a work for Africa. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Salini Nair 05 December 2014

The divine weaver is busy in weaving, A lovely and colorful dress for you, A happy prosperous redress for you, .......................you have crafted it in an amazing way.....great work

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Valsa George 05 December 2014

Great poem! Yes, once it was the dark continent, but now Africa has risen to great heights! From the yoke of imperialism and racial discrimination, the nation has almost been set free! As you believe, the needle of time is moving in her favour! Let us hope that a nation that bore its burdens with patience will be amply rewarded with great prosperity in the near future! Enjoyed the poem! A 10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 December 2014

Very animating and inspiring words spelt out here for the bright future of Africa.......very nicely composed....10/10

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