My Valentine Comments

what a memory of hope...a flying heart of solitude amongst the wilderness of surrender and passion....complicated yet! a things to accept what is love and fantasy....Great...God blesses...a 10 +++

An introvert valentine, Kranthi, but nice one.

Its very soft and nice but yes it could be more romantic

I was hoping it would be more romantic good write

Comes across with a gentle feeling.

the last two lines said it all. gr8888t write before this valentines night.

it's hard to write a poem with a single rhyme pattern.... proves only that you're a great poet..... well done!

You have set the poem to uniform rhyme, giving a place to your Valentine in your lovely heart at the end. Good.