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good poem. why are you not writing now/

Beyond all lies there was/is one truth- [Verse 1] Age ye rooz beri safar Beri ze pisham bi khabar Asire royaha misham Dobare baz tanha misham Be shab migam pisham bemoone Be baad migam ta sob bekhoone Bekhoone az diare yari Chera miri tanham mizari? Age ye rooz faraamoosham koni Tarke aaghoosham koni Parandeie darya misham Too change moj raha misham Be del migam khamoosh bemoone Miram ke har kassi bedoone Miram bessooie oon diari Ke toosh mano tanha nazaari [Hook] Age ye roozy noome to Too gooshe man seda kone Dobare baz ghamet biad Ke mano mobtala kone Be del migam karish nabashe Bezareh darde to davah she Bereh tooyeh tamoomeh joonam Keh baz barat avaz bekhoonam [Verse 2] Age bazam delet meekhad Yareh yek deegar basheem Mesaleh ayoomeh ghadeem Bensheeneem va sahar pasheem Bayad delet rangee begeereh Dobareh ahangee begeereh Begeereh rangeh oon deeyaree Keh toosh mana tanha nazaree Age mikhay peesham bemoonee Beeya ta bagheeye javoonee Beeya to poost beh ostokhooneh Nazar delam tanha bemooneh Bezar shabam rangee begeereh Dobareh ahangee begeereh Begeereh rangeh oon deeyaree Keh toosh mana tanha nazaree

Nikunj sharma is right... why no infinity...? ? ?

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us. please read some of mine.

hi, It's a nice poem, so true about the lies that circumscribe a life of love sometimes. But if at all lies are not detected, not at all admitted but by its nature it gradually becomes transparent and fades out to surface the truth. I find it so heartspoken one. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Gautam

My fettish desires of that virtual kiss Nay not legal-that kiss of vengeance But osculatory perfunction Of my pure infection.............................. love when bewilders on the rune of deceit legacy of kisses slowly turns to fossil yet mathematics of monalisa reflexes into the geometry of Freudian curvatures, wonderful exposition of dialectical method to dissipate truth on the ruse of salubrious subtlety, yet ingenious by imagery and metaphors, superb yet ingenious,10+++, thanks for shariong

O why O why! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -................................ Of two lonely souls in this universe of skulduggery Grand opening......a smart usage of phrases and words, shows your mastery with the language and life....meaningful questions asked here provide a solid start to an inquisitive journey on a real curvacious road.... Yes lies galore....... ............And danes of shame this further intesifies the quest and desire of going to the depth, by questioning the very essence of a relationship...simple words yet powerful message here.... Words juggled forth in and out ..................................... Of simultaneous equations and multiplications. yet again further inroads are made here in the deeper aspects of relationship and more questions surface....I think a strong parallel can be drawn here with life...I am sure lot of readers would have experienced this kind of stuff in their lives.. Yes truth still seeks truth.................. ..........As deceptive of a mirage in a desert truth is afraid at times, I agree for it may uncover some ugly lies...this is a very strong stanza....I liked it very much How is skulduggery served? My fettish desires of that virtual kiss Nay not legal-that kiss of vengeance But osculatory perfunction Of my pure infection. These two stanzas deal with how people feign something and how smooth operators deliver the tricks to the innocent minds and hearts...I loved some metaphors here.....again superlative language displayed here.... To soothe that blurred appearance ......................... To grand old men Of Idis’ empires. Wow is the word for this stanza, vivid imagery here and meaningful questions that come staright from the depth of a pure and innocent heart, a hint of lament and disgust here, a bit of complaint, a touch sad and concerned...this stanza acts as a perfect cog in this poetic machine..... Though thou art so close, yet so far .....What a powerful phrase here, do we know each other, near yet far, knwing the unknowns about someone close, appearances may deceive, perceptions may misguide and heart felt beliefs may give way one day.....this one has pain and bit of grief in here..... Asked my Lord Give me the strength To chose the right In thy clear sight If it be thy holy will Then make me that oil In his lamp To shine and burn With him forever Or just let me be that perfume That lingereth in him Until I am no more But that lingering fragrance Be his muted light A smile in his life Be it only for a second But one that will Remain in our hearts UNTIL DEATH DO US PART The last stanza is as divine as a prayer is, words are sacred and powerful, meaningful and stir the conscience and the soul at the same time....the phrases are lovely, to be the oil in his lamp, the perfume that lingers until......and a smile that stays forever in his /our hearts till the end of this world.... I do not know if I fully understood this poem, but can surely say that it has urged tme to learn more and I salute to your poetic skills..... Anju....This is too good a poem....10 from me....Why cant they put infinity on that scale

wisdom and beauty kisses you every day. 10++++++++++ Randy~*~

Beautiful poem! A well crafted and thought provoking poem. Well done. Enjoyed reading it

This is undisputedly your best Anjali...its is tremnedously fluid and majestic..i just love it my lil Genius :)

wow truth lies fantasy midnight oil and a teacher of maths, very clever poem by a very clever writer....love knows no bounds nore your pen..smashing++++10 regards ps what has happened to the readers of ozzi poems we are all sinking bar 2

Excellent in the extreme as lie is to truth. Well done my friend.10++

10+++++ very excelent piece! !

My truth, your lies This poem is so hi-fi That it need IQ that vies for sky But I couldn’t grasp it I confess with sigh Coz it need IQ 1008 And I fall one short of that… ..a good write..10+…

The Doomsday Yet the lies than truths To the deceptive illusions of visions What I craft like no lunatic From earth and heaven bring beauty No holy man preaching good deeds Love is the morale of this story told Lies that I loved in fantasy Truth shall be like another dismay Appearance of you shall no more No less than the doomsday ..........good poem Anjali.10++

The Doomsday Yet the lies than truths To the deceptive illusions of visions What I craft like no lunatic From earth and heaven bring beauty No holy man preaching good deeds Love is the morale of this story told Lies that I loved in fantasy Truth shall be like another dismay Appearance of you shall no more No less than the doomsday ..........good poem Anjali.10++

You're good in crafting a love poem.Just do what you're best at doing.Marvellous!

Anjali the mathematician and Anjali the poet joined hands so nicely in the poem...'a graphic picture is available through choicest phrases such as 'fetish desire for a virtual kiss'(I wanted one to know its type and force! ! !) , secret worries nagged me wholsale, osculatory perfunction of mypure infection and so on. The poem is long, but not an issue. The reader can read for the poem for long and enjoy the long company of the poet.. that is the plus point of a lengthy poem...

Lovely piece! A well crafted and thought provoking poem.

This is a very interesting if somewhat long poem, Anjali, but I liked how you adroitly moved into the summation of this fascinating poem, which made it a bit more understandable for your readers. This fine write often touches upon beauty, but also upon a bit of sarcasism as well for a lover who tries to be devious instead of loving. Carl.