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Thursday, April 3, 2008

My Perfect Friend Comments

Rating: 4.0

My perfect friend holds me tight
My perfect friend kisses me goodnight
My perfect friend loves me for me
My perfect friend wont let me be
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Wishing And Dreaming 101 25 March 2012

wow i like this but if you live where i live all you know is they will backstab you or leave

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Ashok Thakur 24 November 2011

So Beautifull, Hope may i could meet my once, If you ever come in india please let me knw. Wish you all the best, God bless you, My email, 86akthakur@gmail.com

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Paloma Chavez 11 August 2010

This poem says everything about my perfect friend...

43 12 Reply

wow....that is just like me and my best friend allen................

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Chunia Goel 16 March 2010

a true one really.this one is a special. I COULD EASILY RELATE IT TO MY PERFECT FRIEND

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Michelle Suarez 12 February 2010

that's beautiful! *** not everything relates to my friend but most of it does...it sounds like you have a perfect friend! ... my friend is not but i accept him the way he is: D

25 17 Reply
Lexa Love 14 September 2009

i can relate to this....................its awesome

28 16 Reply
Rebecca Martin 02 September 2009

I really enjoyed reading this poem on Friends :) ...every bit of it is so true about what a perfect friend should be! ! ! :) Great Job! ! Keep on keeping on :) ! -Rebecca :)

23 14 Reply
Zogam Mi 07 August 2009

well, that we will be perfect in ur world.lets be do it, I love this poem.

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faygo^042809= ) 26 March 2009

i love this i cried when i read it it is amazing ur a true poet i rate it a ten

30 12 Reply
Jerry Hughes 06 December 2008

Nobody, but nobody can be so perfect! Cheers, Jerry

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I Am Me 15 November 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! thats what i call really good its soo true and thats...just...wow

2 1 Reply
Michole Petersen 25 October 2008

im sorry ordinary girl but i have to disagree with tiffany i loved your poem it was so heart felt and i could feel your sorrow

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Star Dust 26 September 2008

wicked! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! awesome poem great stuff! ! ! ! =]

2 1 Reply
Omar Kaiam 12 August 2008

it is great in sense but repeatable..

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Fee Chen 02 July 2008

you got the great poems... i just now lost my friend... can i ask you... r we can lost if we call him 'best friend'...

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Sabrina L. 21 June 2008

All i can say about this poem is that it was PERFECT! !

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Kelcey Bridger 18 May 2008

this poem is really really great! ! i really loved how you can tell he's been with you through a lot and youve been through a lot! i loved it! !

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Jade Hall 20 April 2008

I LOVE THIS POEM! ! ! ! ! !

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Zubaida Boland 03 April 2008

a really nice poem that i'd call a masterpeice going on great with the rhymes go on with your great job it's really great

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