Eleven. Nay, ‘twas nine who lived,
For two were swept away from care
Before their childish feet could lead
Them to the comfort of that chair.
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Enjoyable to read, filled with emotions wanting me to pull up a seat and sit and stay a while,
Dear Adeline this also is a precious stone. Love and smiles for every child. Thank you!
As usual, another rare beauty.Inspiring and ever tender- a sweet remembrance. Perhaps you would view my ''A Mother's Words
This one was beautiful, Like the mood of the poem. It reminds me of the comfort of a good mother. I like it
beautiful poem with nice rhyme melody and open poet`s heart.
Lovely, personal poem which flows well in rhyme and time. A 10 from me. -chuck
This is a fine and well considered poem. Loving, reflective but projecting hope, free from excessive sentimentality as is the too easy path that delivers a cringing response. This delivers a beacon of care and cherished memories kindly told. Thank you.
You are my favorite poet and this is another very good poem. You have such a way with words. I still haven't figured out how to put anyone on my favorite poets list yet, but I'll keep trying and you'll be the first one that I add!
Beautiful! You have such a wonderful way with words. You're definitely going onto my favourite poets list! Dawn xx