v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

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Friday, July 22, 2016

Morning Prayers Comments

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Every morning I pray to god
To chase off the dark clouds and
Bring a hopeful bright sunshine.
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 July 2016

Hi saraswathy, A very noble prayer indeed. Bless me live life wisely. This line contains the mother of all prayers: -so that, I am happy, satisfied and content of my life -so that, others find my life virtuous -so that I do not step on your toes -so that i do not vitiate the peace and happiness of others etc. ... Very nice work. Well done. Thanks for sharing. Full ten.....

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Thanks a lot your lines literally enhances the simple prayers, lovely gesture, welcome dear

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 July 2016

Mirror image! So i reap. Nice piece of work.

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Welcome dear thank you for the review

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